The Consistency Check: Auditing Copy Against Voice Pillars
Objective: Given 5 real-style copy samples from different channels, score each against a brand's voice pillars and contrast statements to spot where voice breaks down.
You're a junior copywriter at Squarespace reviewing five pieces of copy pulled from the last quarter, an ad, an email subject line, a support chat reply, a blog intro, and a social caption, to check whether they actually sound like the same brand.
Apply the 'we are X, not Y' contrast-statement test to catch inconsistency that a normal proofread misses.
Before you start
What you'll need
Free path (everything below is enough to finish)
Free, easy commenting for flags
The process
1 step
Step 01 of 01
The lesson's Step 1 defines voice pillars as 3-4 adjectives paired with a 'we are X, not Y' contrast statement, a vague adjective like 'friendly' means nothing without the contrast.
Squarespace's stated pillar is 'confident, not arrogant.' Which of these 5 samples fails that test?
Procedure
- Paste the 5 samples into a Google Doc, one per row
- Score each sample 1-5 against the 'confident, not arrogant' contrast statement
- Flag any sample scoring 2 or below and write the specific phrase that broke the pillar
SAMPLE 3 (support chat reply): 'Obviously you just need to check your billing settings, that's pretty basic.' Score: 1/5 Flag: 'Obviously' and 'pretty basic' read as arrogant, not confident. Violates pillar.
Healthy
4 of 5 samples score 4+ and the one flagged sample gets rewritten before publishing.
Unhealthy
All 5 samples get approved because nobody actually re-reads them against the pillar, just against a spell-checker.
What this means
A voice pillar without a scoring pass against real copy is decoration, not governance.
So what do I do about it?
| Symptom | Action | Effort |
|---|---|---|
| Support chat replies keep sounding harsher than the brand's ads | Add the contrast-statement scoring pass to the support team's QA checklist, not just marketing's | 30 min |
Final deliverable
A scored table of 5 copy samples with the lowest-scoring sample rewritten to match the voice pillar.
See a reference example
Chewy voice audit (excerpt) SAMPLE: Email subject line - 'Your order shipped! 📦' Pillar: warm, not saccharine Score: 5/5 SAMPLE: Paid ad headline - 'INSANE savings you can't miss!!!' Score: 2/5 — 'INSANE' and the triple exclamation break the calm-confidence pillar.
Success criteria
You're done when you can:
- Correctly scores all 5 samples using the contrast-statement test
- Identifies the specific phrase that breaks the pillar in flagged samples